All Comments on 'Pearls to Pour'

One line jars

"Jam runneth over 'til the box cries "More!""

pardon the pun, in the context, it jars

I once knew a girl named Judo who could rhyme so sweetly...

poor poet. almost does not count my dear

poetry pour, ...bows humble (~_~)

flow of nice images.

Shakespearean style and <pardon the pun> an easy flowing one at that. This was a pearl of a poem, Judo. Thank you! <smile>

Vixxx

of images, a nice

read.

thanks.

~ J

In poetry, close is aka "half-ass" attempt. You have it in you to do much better and after so MANY years on this site, seems like some of the real talent in the forum would have rubbed off onto you, M'Dear. Sadly, that talent has moved on to escape the likes of the snobs and attention whores. Keep up the excellent attempts. You ARE getting "closer"