by CincyPolyCouple
Hurray for first person accounts from inaccessible places!
How am I reading this?
Did the character write it before being sucked into hell? Just finishing off that last bit before disappearing?
Am I in hell reading it? Do I get that kind of free time?
Does Hades have a publishing house outside of the underworld?
Wtf?
You have fantastic descriptive language! However I couldn't quite place where the character was and the story seemed jumbled up. She came before being told to....?
Good story idea but very disjointed and jumbled writing. Way more thought and editing required. 2 stars