All Comments on 'Forced to Fuck Cerberus'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Hurray for first person accounts from inaccessible places!

How am I reading this?

Did the character write it before being sucked into hell? Just finishing off that last bit before disappearing?

Am I in hell reading it? Do I get that kind of free time?

Does Hades have a publishing house outside of the underworld?

Wtf?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What???

You have fantastic descriptive language! However I couldn't quite place where the character was and the story seemed jumbled up. She came before being told to....?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
It's good

It's an awesome concept, but I think it needed more editing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story idea but very disjointed and jumbled writing. Way more thought and editing required. 2 stars

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