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Religious
A poem with an intensely biblical feel.
Powerful
and the religious struggle
goes on and on ....factions of the chosen frozen sleeping as the world falls down...great depth...blue
rub Buddha's Belly~
you'll feel better
Very intriguing poem~
your visual and descriptive write was griping.
'Kruks'! "a very important point!"
and a very mystique poem.
(I had my dictionary ready this time )
Powerful!
Love the way this expresses how children are brought into a hopeless world that is so tainted with hate and injustice.
a really strong
and powerful piece,
exceptionally well
written, a very
enjoyable read.
thanks.
~ J
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A really haunting look at the birthplace of the three major monotheistic faiths.
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