All Comments on 'Etienne's Reward Ch. 01'

by MyLadyInChains

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TheKrrakTheKrrakover 5 years ago
The new model...

obviously is Lisa...

Should have just made this submission longer, as we know who it is.

MyLadyInChainsMyLadyInChainsover 5 years agoAuthor
Reply to the Krakk

Thank you for your feedback. I thought about submitting it all in one go, but I decided to break it up into three parts, mainly because I have a job that doesn't allow me to sit and write all day long like I would like to. I'm sorry you felt this was too short, but hopefully, that means you liked it?

LittleKayLittleKayover 5 years ago
I see what you mean...

I see what you mean about writing styles, my dear Lady.

Ignore people about submission lengths. You do you. I particularly love it, I love the straight man submitting to the kink with another male. And I love that it has been an ongoing thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Superb story line, no over the top but most factual.

It reads easily and well of a story lived and enjoyed!

Hope it goes further..

Biboi54RBiboi54Rover 4 years ago
I Want to be Him

Great story, need the rest. My wife and her dominant sister dress me up and make me crawl around on my hands and knees with a dog tail buttplug up my ass, I'm their little puppy dog. Then they take turns fucking me with strapons. I love being dominated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
But... more please!

Lol! So.... when are you going to write more?

This is a great first submission. It ended too soon!

Can’t wait to read more! I’m really enjoying these characters and the scene set up so far!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like it. It's good and make me excited.

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