All Comments on 'Seducing Madison'

Well done, girl! Love the initial reluctance.

If this is your first story can't wait for more. Think i'll take my better half shopping now.

So hot again! You are my favorite author on here! Thank you for continuing to write. Madison definitely needs it in her mouth soon. Maybe prom night or after church?

of a high school hottie losing her virginity to her conniving college beau. I am torn between leaving this gem alone or following Madison's descent into depravity, for she now seems ready for anything.

Sexy and fun and hot in all the best and most naughty ways. To echo another comment, I'm torn between wanting this to remain a one-shot and seeing what particular depths of depravity Madison might be taken to. As always, well done!

Such sweet comments. I was planning on this being a one off story but if I come up with a cracking idea for a sequel I'll do it. Other stories are coming too. Feel free to check out the rest of my work and please give me some stars if you enjoy them a lot! - xoxo Daphne

That was hot!

Don't know about a sequel, what about with a new virgin girlfriend who has to be coerced and this time her mother walks in to see her daughter being fucked?

Keeping this one to masturbate too, that's for sure!

I relate to your characters soooo much & feeling like (wishing)it was happening to me in real life!

Was this ever continued?

You have GOT to do Mom!

Loved this a lot!! Please please pleaseee make a sequel..

Well I was working on a sequel but then the rating for this story dropped below 4.5 so I stopped working on it. If it goes up again I'll get back to it but otherwise I won't bother. Ratings shouldn't matter that much but they matter to me, and I don't want to put in the work if the appreciation isn't there.

Really enjoyed the story. Lived every moment.

Love this story - sequel please! Trying to add starts but lit won’t let me

Is there going to be a sequel? Would give this full 5 stars but can't seem to rate this somehow.

Very well written. Loved it. Is there gonna be a sequel?

Daphne123

Definitely 5 stars. Only trouble is the system isnt showing the space to rate this.

Fantastic story.

Daphne,

You have got to continue this story! Please.

joe

joemm1961@yahoo.com

Did she get pregnant? I really want to know!

5 Stars

Great writing. Great pace . Great story.

Nowhere to give you stars or I would give you five. Don't stop writing because of the ratings, write for yourself. If they like it, that's great but there will always be the ones who don't. Don't deprive us of your stories because of them!

LOVED IT

This was so good! Oh my god! Just wonderful!

Write for yourself Daphne. There will always be detractors that have no idea how much time and work goes into even a short story. I have personally spent days agonizing over a single paragraph. Good job. Keep writing.

Gene Moon aka Moonshine57

More stories like this one are on Daphne's Den (link in my bio).