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A very beautiful and well thought out
love story. I believe that you touched all of the bases to tell this story and to do it well. Ronnie W.
sweet.
two damaged people come together, a woman isolated by her beauty and a man isolated by his fear and workaholism.
sweet.
Exquisite!
Your story is extraordinary! You present the entire progression of ideas and events with the same polish and class you attribute to the lady in the story. In doing so with such care and concern for her, you depict with clarity and conviction the ascendency of emotion and involvement in each other in intimacy over the physical acts taken in isolation. Very well done.
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OH MY GOD!!!!! This is an immensley romantic yet erotoic story that would appeal to any woman. This is every working womans dream and if you differ then you are probably lying. Kudos to you my dear friend. I love you heart and soul.
a quality in it that is never seen
you portrayed one of the things hardley anyone duplicates well in their stories human emoution this is by far one of the best stories ive read.
There are wise words about writing
Show us don't tell us. The total narration was numbing and boring.
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