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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/24/05

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Damn
need I say more?
Deceptive simplicity

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by Maria239405/24/05

this is the first one

of yours that "did something" to me. I wont congratulate you on the E,( as obtaining one is never the intent when one writes a poem here) but I will say congrats on such an interesting, thought provoking poem. Good work, it is a pleasure to read and re-read.

maria

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by WickedEve05/24/05

this is really good

That's a lame comment, but it's really good.

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by Jennifer C05/25/05

very good

liked it very much.
thanks.
~ J

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by LeBroz06/25/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.



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