by Vinny Smith
GOOD STORY AS NOT ALL END HAPPILY. BUT ISN'T THAT HOW LIFE REALLY WORKS? HE SHOULD HAVE LEFT THE WOMAN ALONE. HOPE THE PUSSY WAS WORTH IT TO HIM, AS TO ME HE WILL BE PAYING A VERY HIGH PRICE FOR IT.
this is the most realistic and sane story I've read in the category. Good job.
It was -very- well written, and sends an awesome message, "know your shit before you use it" since I know some people use chloraphorm for medical play. But it really is in the wrong category, it should have been in Erotic horror.
Wasn't expecting how dark this one became. Very good writing, though I will admit, the second half or so really freaked me out. Still, I can't fault you for being realistic with it.
well that went south really fucking fast. Could have been 5 stars. Maybe you should write for Law and Order SVU