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by Anonymous

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by trendyredhead05/26/05

The pacing was nice

Would be even better if you changed "bodies" to "body's" throughout (a minor correction but an important one). Overall, I liked the short phrases, and your meter was good.

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by Bridget6905/27/05

!

This has nice energy throughout.

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by Jennifer C05/28/05

really good

loved the energy
and flow of this,
really worked for me.
enjoyed the read, thanks.
~ J

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by Anonymous10/10/06

Heart racing

Where do you find someone who can make your heart race like that?

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by Amyfriend02/01/07

Very effective...

I liked the pace of it.. as you were driven to higher highs by your master.

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