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by MarkThyme

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Not Bad, but...

... You really should use an editor to stop the grammer/spelling problems with stories. Also, use of the same word to describe something over and over gets old. Keep writing.

BloombloomBloombloomalmost 13 years ago

so wait. is this a true story? Cause if it is. That's freaking amazing !

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