All Comments on 'The Two Sisters'

Surely you will be adding to this. This is a nice idea, and this one page is like a nice opening statement, but if this is the entire story, you wasted your time. There's nothing there. If you have more planned, I anxiously await it. If this is.it, you struck out. No score yet until I see if you're going anywhere with this.

this promised to be a wonderful story .... 5 STARS from me

Great storyline but need more.

I like a good tease especially if it pays off in the end. I like how you introduced the characters without having a narrator (or first person narrative) just state everything up front.

I felt like a robot wrote this. What I thought would lead in one direction, it took a drastic turn. The story has promise if some feeling is injected into it.

I like the story a lot. AAAA++++

I wish that you would finish this story

"Tow surprised..." when you have a story include so much correspondence and can't spell a three-letter word. Please stop, as you're obviously about quantity and not quality.

Why couldn't the author complete this story?