All Comments on 'Friendship, Wine and Temptation Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very nice story

Your story is great ,, but can you make a little longer each chapter ,, bcz its really exciting.

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 5 years ago
Great Read

You are developing the characters so well cannot wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What's next?!

Can't wait for the next chapter I seriously hope it comes soon (as well as them lol) I'm literally.on the edge of my seat!

Dray26Dray26over 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

Thanks so much for the comments. The conclusion is longer, and should be posted in a few days. Hopefully you will enjoy it. I know I'm going to miss Karen and Jess, and who knows? If there is enough interest I may continue their story.

If you get a chance, please read my other short stories, which also focus more on character development than on hard-core sex. A conclusion to "Open House" will be completed soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Keep it going

Love this series. Can't wait for the next chapter.💕

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ch 4!!!

I love your writing style. Very descriptive, engaging, seductive, and hot! I need Chapter 4!!!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 5 years ago

These "minute stories" are getting on my nerves. They're too damn short! But good thing they're coming quickly. See ya, gotta go. Another one has been posted

Lions86Lions86almost 2 years ago

i cant stand when i find a story i like and it actually draws my attention and then after a decently long first part the others are all just one page short as hell chapters.

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