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Two Bucks and A Ticket to Hell

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/26/05

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Zen fury - explain
I like the title with the last line, but it has a tendency to take the mind elsewhere
Good
"funkadelic sofas,
the unspoken gigolo,"
These are getting better with more story.

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by WickedEve05/27/05

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well, I had fun reading this. Thank you for that. :)

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by dcpoet4405/28/05

enjoyed.....

and i love the abu ghraib in america. that is a great dig......nicely done.......don

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by Jennifer C05/28/05

great stuff

really enjoyed this piece,
well written and fun.
thanks.
~ J

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