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Little Mel

byLucky Mann©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/05

nice but...

why didn't she get the divorce and seperation proceedures going when she got the restraining order?

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by Anonymous05/30/05

Other comment is from an idiot

Great story... a little short... a Part II would be great...

The other reader that left a comment about getting the other legal documents is an idiot... it would have served no purpose and added nothing to the story...

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by Anonymous05/30/05

a nonny mouse

Your story is very tender and rewarding. I would like to read anything else you have to offer.
As to why no divorce etc, the poor girl obviously didn't have much money. A restraining order is relatively free and will do the trick.

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by Nightowl2205/30/05

Good story here

It's always good to read about benevolent people. BUT, regardless, she should have started the divorce before getting in his bed.
If Rob finds out about their living arrangements, any divorce she applies for could backfire.

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by Ronnie Wachuka08/14/05

Caught a review

in the Public Viewing area and the review made me take a peak. Glad I did because it would appear that the Little Mel series will make some great late night reading if they are as good as this one. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by Anonymous01/12/10

Great Job!

I really like this story! It was very hot and a sweet ending.. Wonderful job, I really love all of yours, but this one was Great! Can't wait for more stories! :)

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by Anonymous09/03/13

Your story is me

Quite enjoyed seeing my life portrayed in such a sexual, more exciting ending. I will dream of this hoping it will happen to me next!!!

-little red

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