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Best I've seen from you, and the rest where very good
as a lead line, this is OK, but the poem deserves better.
"A distant scream, primal urgency"
Like the title - caught my eye
The museing understated style, excellent counterbalace to the quotes
"And as a poet, his lies."... worse, most of them beleive 'em
Very good
Like it.
Enjoyed the poem. 1201 says it all.
b'brig
A five
I read this several times and each time it got better and better. It's an intelligent poem with many facets. I think it will be with me for a while.
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Very good writing as usual. I think I've missed a couple of your new ones, and now I need to go look them up. :)
nice........
and agree with all the comments left......nice job.....don
I agree
that this is a very
intelligent poem,
extremely well written
and i really enjoyed
reading it.
thanks.
~ J
I like
word play in English
But here is a word play in German, I could almost sense the pun, but I did have to research to really understand.
Yes, lunatics are humans.
This is a clever and intelligent poem.
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