Not much for an ending but this starts out different.
The part I don't figure is her agreeing so readily to fuck him for the financial help.I guess she may have set her sights for him and pursued her goal in this manner. Different! And she may just be a devout pragmatist. Different.
I will be interested in reading a couple of the best entries.
It will be interesting to see which of the finished stories are crap and which are good. Looking forward to the contest as a bystander.
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Anonymous05/30/05
It doesn't flow at all.
The conversation really jumps way beyond a normal conversation. The subject of the conversation and the actual words just don't seem likely to me. She is just out of high school and he is how old? Hope you get some novices to give it a try! I just don't think it will be easy to clean up.
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Anonymous06/06/05
What To Do!
I have read all (or most) of your stories posted on literotica.com and enjoyed them. I would not know how to write as well as you and, in this case, could not even give anyone a hint on how to proceed. It is quite chalenging.
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05/16/06
Just to make sure I have...
publicly thanked you!
Responding to this challenge with "What Now? - My Ending DYJ" was what got started me writing - I'd always just sat on the sidelines before! So, for better or worse, readers have you to thank for the stories I've written.
I'm surprised no one else has written a finish for this. What about it readers?
Anyway, Thanks! DJ
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Anonymous06/06/06
I find your stories fun
I like to read as far back as I can remember reading
and one of the biggist crap is most of the stories are just repeats of others.
I have trying to find stories where its the man side that has the upper hand not the woman, Ive been through the woman you date suddenly thinking you not the right guy and I have turned the tables on them. I have only dated one woman more than once if we broke up cause I beleave if they will do it once they will do it again, and most times Ive been right, I will still read your stuff and now I think ill try to type some stories and post them just so you can read them
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Anonymous07/21/12
How much writing is junk?
I once read what a famous man said over 100 years ago:
Ninety percent of all art is junk. Ninety percent of all music is junk. Ninety percent of all writing is junk.
I wish I knew who said it. I think part of our job in life is to learn to tell the difference, and figure out where to look for the good stuff. Today he would say 90 percent of all television is junk, and 99 percent of the interet is junk. Good thing we have search engines to help sort through all the junk. It is a major job to learn how to do a useful search, and narrow it down to what I really want. I am beginning to think 90 percent of all food is junk. I wish I had realized that about food 50 years ago (but maybe 50 years ago there was not as much junk food).
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Different!
Not much for an ending but this starts out different.
The part I don't figure is her agreeing so readily to fuck him for the financial help.I guess she may have set her sights for him and pursued her goal in this manner. Different! And she may just be a devout pragmatist. Different.
I will be interested in reading a couple of the best entries.
Nice concept
It will be interesting to see which of the finished stories are crap and which are good. Looking forward to the contest as a bystander.
It doesn't flow at all.
The conversation really jumps way beyond a normal conversation. The subject of the conversation and the actual words just don't seem likely to me. She is just out of high school and he is how old? Hope you get some novices to give it a try! I just don't think it will be easy to clean up.
What To Do!
I have read all (or most) of your stories posted on literotica.com and enjoyed them. I would not know how to write as well as you and, in this case, could not even give anyone a hint on how to proceed. It is quite chalenging.
Just to make sure I have...
publicly thanked you!
Responding to this challenge with "What Now? - My Ending DYJ" was what got started me writing - I'd always just sat on the sidelines before! So, for better or worse, readers have you to thank for the stories I've written.
I'm surprised no one else has written a finish for this. What about it readers?
Anyway, Thanks! DJ
I find your stories fun
I like to read as far back as I can remember reading
and one of the biggist crap is most of the stories are just repeats of others.
I have trying to find stories where its the man side that has the upper hand not the woman, Ive been through the woman you date suddenly thinking you not the right guy and I have turned the tables on them. I have only dated one woman more than once if we broke up cause I beleave if they will do it once they will do it again, and most times Ive been right, I will still read your stuff and now I think ill try to type some stories and post them just so you can read them
How much writing is junk?
I once read what a famous man said over 100 years ago:
Ninety percent of all art is junk. Ninety percent of all music is junk. Ninety percent of all writing is junk.
I wish I knew who said it. I think part of our job in life is to learn to tell the difference, and figure out where to look for the good stuff. Today he would say 90 percent of all television is junk, and 99 percent of the interet is junk. Good thing we have search engines to help sort through all the junk. It is a major job to learn how to do a useful search, and narrow it down to what I really want. I am beginning to think 90 percent of all food is junk. I wish I had realized that about food 50 years ago (but maybe 50 years ago there was not as much junk food).
Nice start for a series of stories -
I did not find a lot of takers - but we will see where it goes -
Just came
across someone's continuation. What a great idea! More authors should try it.
I Don't Unerstand
He's got more money than he knows what to do with.
He has a deserving, needy young woman.
Why not simply HELP her?
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