All Comments on 'Portions for Foxes'

Good story!!

Good writing. I don't understand the money part at the end though. Or maybe I do, now that I think of it. Keep writing.

Very funny spoonerism about half way down. I hope for ur sake it was intentional!!

I actually had to read the story again to make sure that you were talking about the intentional soonerism, "pobody's nerfect" rather than some godawful mistake I'd made. I can be pretty poor at proof reading.

Anyway, I can confirm it was a joke by one of the characters, even though as spoonerisms go it is a pretty poor one. A more appropriate one for this sort of story might be something along the lines of...

cunning stunt, perhaps?

Thanks to everyone who commented, and I hope you enjoyed this story. Next one coming soon.