All Comments on 'Melissa, Our Roommate Ch. 01'

Nicely paced. Realistic scenerio. Good writing. I look forward to future chapters.

Very hot story, with just enough realism for it to be exciting.

Good beginning... but the ending took about 5 minutes to write... a real let down...

Melissa needs to get fucked, too. Perhaps you can start two families here with two "mommies", and keep one of them pregnant most of the time, with some baby girls being born in the future to also fuck when they begin "wearing the rag". A very good story plot!

That's a great first chapter. I can't wait to read the rest.

in later chapters, this turns into a unrealistic cuckold story.

Wow, think I'm gonna love this series, so hot!