by espeteroh
More, more, more please!! It's time for Lisa to get hers. Keep it coming. Well written
she gets raped and that "turns" her lesbian? bullshit. rape is a lot more serious then it is portrayed in this story.
I thought that it was pretty well written except for a few errors in the grammar. I really enjoyed the story especially when Lisa took Gwen to a place that she deserved to be after her awful first time with that horrible Juvenile uncaring excuse for a boyfriend. I thought that the way you brought her back to a better understanding girl who was really interested in doing something for her to ease the terrible memory of her first time was the right thing that you did. Really liked and enjoyed their first time together.
As always. Betsey
The second comment, from 6/19/11, says it all. The author cheats all readers by connecting a rape to the rapture of Lesbian love.