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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/28/05

reference this

no need to front with me. i'm in you the way you are

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by Jennifer C05/28/05

interesting piece

I liked it but i'm
not sure why lol,
just enjoyed the read.
thanks.
~ J

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by z3n_Master08/09/07

sub-genius

the smartest
stupid person
i know
we know

he takes his time
turning the phrase
slip of the tongues
guilted gills
jilted via
steel lines
talking none
no, sir
no, not never

the noose, that
underneath muscle
the steel ring
noosing itself tighter

and still it wont come
it is stucken
rusted down

so I bend down
for a better look
tasted tangy
to the touch

cherry still burns bright
the godless night
entwinned in
eternity
riches
of the beyond
the end
of the sea

and dread
the milky coming
of the shore


~z3n

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