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syrynsmythsyrynsmythover 5 years ago
Good start!

Good start. I'm looking forward to see where this goes. I'm nervous about who in the family is going to be Nyla's caretaker. Personally, for me, excessive interactions with the father or any with the little brother may cause the story to slip out of my comfort zone. Otherwise, rock on!

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I grew up in a strict, conservative household. By the time I was 11 my wild imagination had conjured up all sorts of dirty, sexual fantasies with no help from anyone OR the internet. Take THAT, mom and dad! Please enjoy my writing and feel free to leave comments! (Hate it? Lov...