All Comments on 'An Adventurer's Fate'

It is unfortunate that one-shots traditionally receive lower ratings, because many of the longer stories could learn a few things from your work. Nothing is unnecessary or gratuitous; if there was even a single typo or grammatical mistake, I didn't catch it; tone, flow and use of stylistic elements are perfect. All in all, this is an easy five stars.

Loved the entire thing.

Amazing story. You should really do a part two or three. no escape and endless cycles of orgasms is an interesting take.

I totally agree with 12/09/18.

They already said what I would have.

Five Stars!!!

All my favorite things: high fantasy, bondage, forced orgasm, tickling. Super well-described flow of action, and I especially like that the slime is a mindless torturer. Loved every bit of it!

I’ve just read all of your stories to date (4), they’re very entertaining you have a great writing style. Spinning tales and giving an insight into an alternate world they’re funny and sexy at the same time, a rare combination.

Look forward to reading more of your stories, thanks for sharing them.