All Comments on 'The Adventures of Hazel Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Dimensions

Crimfolk, I've read a couple of your submissions and unless you're using some type of UK measuring system the breast dimensions you've been using are unrealistic. While I enjoy your plot lines a woman having a 28B bust is something a 12 year old or someone weighing about 80 lbs. would have.

crimfolkcrimfolkover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Very fair comment - but I could say that the male narrator is perhaps making a mistake there. I'm sure he'll get it a little closer to the truth in a future chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice adventure ...

It looks like Hazel could end up as a paid prostitute, she would do a good job.

auhound49auhound49over 5 years ago
More Please!

Please let her become a hooker, and sell herself unprotected! Please do not get her on the pill, other than perhaps a morning after pill now and then. Unprotected pregnancy risk sex is the only real sex there is! All else is just mutual masterbation.

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 2 years ago

Kept getting so sick on the pill so I dodged alot of Bullets but then some Mens shot straight in to me DEEP enough that there Potent Black Cum found my egg. I been blessed a few times that way. Wouldnt change what I done with not insisting them wear a condom or me just not letting them in my little white Pussy at the time. I know I been Truly Blessed they gave me what they gave me when my Periods didnt come after.

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I'm about half way through Challenge 5 but the pace has picked up! ETA is somewhere next month once I have completed and edited. My aim has always been to post monthly and one day I'll get back there but not while posting longform! Thanks for all the support and kind comments

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