All Comments on 'The Intern Ch. 04'

You have written a very lovely story that has captured my interest and I'm sure that of other readers. Slow movement and then you have suggested many avenues that this story may take. Also, showing that Ms. P seemingly has fallen in love with Yvonne by her thoughts. Also, Rose and her Mom will soon be part of this lovely tail.

One thing however, is that you never explained why Yvonne is such a submissive young lady, why as it would have added to your story.

This could be a book if you have the desire to write more as the prior chapters have set future chapters up for sure.

Keep writing as this story is very good.

Totally agree with anon. So far this series has grabbed and captured me. This is sexy writing at its best but I want MORE!

Hallo Mistress Christine!

A very enjoyable story,,, yes! ... Thank-you _ 5-Stars!

Your dyke friend,

Gay Kat.