All Comments on 'Friendship, Wine and Temptation Ch. 04'

Such a nice and touching love story.

My least favorite story in the series. Too many "moans and moaned in her mouth" for me. Perhaps it's a good thing FWT has come to an end. Dray did you run out of steam. Oh well, it was cool while it lasted.

Nice pace, loving story. I do think that censoring the dialogue to keep it R rated went too far, made the story un-natural. Rest was great, much better story than most in the romance section. Thanks for sharing.

meh this really had no business being on an erotic site. was a decent story but could have been so much better

Eroticism isn't simply, pounding, sliding, slippery sex. Eroticism is anticipation, attraction, feeling, yearning, especially yearning. Stroke story? No and thank you for that. It was just as good if not better the second time around. Don't we all want to know what love is?