Such a tease, leaving me hanging like this, all slick with butter, the sweet taste of honey still on my lips. I'm smiling though, my mind whirling as I ponder the wonderful release that's certain to result from sliding inside that sexy smoothness. Can't wait for more!
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Anonymous06/03/05
Great!
Very detailed! It felt like you were there yourself holding the butter stick!!
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Anonymous07/13/05
WOW! Great details and funny side coments to!
Loved the details and the part where you leave the story to make the reader understand about the butter's shape and size.
LOVED IT!
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Anonymous10/12/10
Nice surprise
Unexpectly...got wood! Fun Good job I'm reading more...Tim
English
sticky fun
Such a tease, leaving me hanging like this, all slick with butter, the sweet taste of honey still on my lips. I'm smiling though, my mind whirling as I ponder the wonderful release that's certain to result from sliding inside that sexy smoothness. Can't wait for more!
Great!
Very detailed! It felt like you were there yourself holding the butter stick!!
WOW! Great details and funny side coments to!
Loved the details and the part where you leave the story to make the reader understand about the butter's shape and size.
LOVED IT!
Nice surprise
Unexpectly...got wood! Fun Good job I'm reading more...Tim
Excellent!
Liked the story, enjoyed the first person narrative, want to read chapter 1 and 3 now. storyteller07
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