All Comments on 'Thomas and Niko Ch. 03'

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Reader777Reader777over 5 years ago

Wonderful story, amazingly well written. So real, I can feel these boy and relate to them so well. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

...really well paced. I feel like I am along for the journey as the boys discover their feelings for each other. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Epic. Sometimes simple is best, and it's working very well here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Whew

I usually don't comment, but I know they can be nice to read and encouraging to in order to update faster? lol. Love your writing, as has been the case with your other two stories. Really interested to see the aftermath of this. Can't wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot; simple and hot

It has been clear from chapter 1 that Niko has been carrying a torch for Thomas for some time, repressed though it may be. Eager to see how this develops.

I also love this much (much!) faster pace of posting - it makes up for the one-pagers you seem to have recently adopted.

kidboisekidboiseover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks everyone

Your kind words mean so much to me. I am writing this one pretty quickly. Chapter 4 has already been submitted and currently working on chapter 5.

uniliveuniliveover 5 years ago

I really liked this chapter as something already started happening between them and now I'm looking forward to see how they will struggle with their sexuality. I'm guessing it will be a bumpy road for them.very engaging chapter!

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