All Comments on 'Captain Emrah Jackson Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
good start

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow, great start

Sounds like Talia is going to be naked for a long while.

greybishopgreybishopabout 5 years ago
Good Start To A Very Good Story

Highlight of ch.1 for me was how the author begins to develop Capt. Jackson. She's obviously competent & serious (which is fine & to be expected,) but her improper relationship with Talia also serves to humanize her, & set the stage for what's to come. Nicely done.

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