All Comments on 'This Side of the Line'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great

excellent! please go on! what happens in three hours?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Put This In BSDM where it may belong

I sense you like it - poor bastard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
PDG...

....please continue quickly. In 3 hours time would be good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Yawn

It was well written but I didn't enjoy the story. In spite of your personal intro, you still took a while to get to the sex... and once it occurred, it was disappointing.

Put this story under the BDSM category, where it belongs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very glad you are back

Please do continue.

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