by royal_riven
excellent! please go on! what happens in three hours?
I sense you like it - poor bastard
....please continue quickly. In 3 hours time would be good.
It was well written but I didn't enjoy the story. In spite of your personal intro, you still took a while to get to the sex... and once it occurred, it was disappointing.
Put this story under the BDSM category, where it belongs.
Please do continue.