All Comments on 'For Him'

Omg this is hot!!! 5 stars!

The author is a scintillating writer. This story is written in exact accordance with the directions presented to her by her Master. She depicts the act of Obedience in perfect relationship between Master and submissive.

Thank you, My sweet jewel. Well writ.

This was very erotic. Written by a passionate heart for sure. A desire for passion and a desire to please is clearly evident.

Nice work Anon. Truly have a talent for setting the scene both aesthetics and mental.

This is very well done and very hot.

This is a silly bit of adolescent fluff that is not exceptional in any way. It's the common theme "dream evening with Master" complete with her meeting him with his pipe and slippers by his chair, his favorite drink prepared and newspaper in her mouth. Or something like that. And it goes downhill from there. i did give it one star because the grammar and sentence structure was better than the typical Lit submission but other than that -- meh

Another fine story, Very well written.

Keep up the good work.

Really enjoyed your writings.