All Comments on 'A Journey Never Begun Pt. 02'

wish it was longer as I get into it I find myself at the end

Thanks for a great read.

Thanks for your comments. I have been accused of writing long stories so I am trying to limit myself in this genre. I am still learning to judge the length in the word processor vs the length when it is published here.

As I get more comfortable I will probably let the length creep up as I get past the exposition parts.

James

"I have been accused of writing long stories so I am trying to limit myself in this genre."

Why the fuck would you listen to someone who doesn't like long stories? Short attention fools nowadays.

An prophecies are a shit macguffin.

Very enjoyable but it takes longer to load than read.