All Comments on 'Teach Me Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely

But she should have come to my house. I also like to teach.

BBeinhartBBeinhartover 5 years ago
Whew!

Hot. Brilliant. Intriguing. More, please!

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
Nicely written

Lame and without making any sense.

I got to the end only because it was short and had not started any storyline.

I dont know why he would be worried about his ex wife if he bonked this woman. You made it sound like he is divorced. So there would be no way he could be forced to pay more money.

Why did he run out at the end, you never explained his reason for it.

If his receptionist does not do any work, why keep her employed.

You never even told us what he does to need an office to see clients 3 days a week.

No stars as nothing happened.

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