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by Anonymous

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by 05/31/05

Brava!

"Making me vulnerable
where I used to be robust
Caressing the shine
Until I'm his mirror"
This says so very much. Eloquence abounds, love. I may be off but it screams to me... "Shape me! You've made me who I am."
Great work.

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by impressive05/31/05

Yup!

What vella said. :D

~Imp

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by ~hellbaby~05/31/05

A Great Reflection of Polished Words

Caressing the shine
until I'm his mirror
I liked it even more the on the second read.

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by LadyJeanne06/03/05

A brilliant

shine does indeed take a little work and finesse, but when done just right, leaves us glowing and open!

Making me vulnerable
where I used to be robust
Caressing the shine
Until I'm his mirror

Love this stanza - reflected lust...who's reflecting whom?

Great work! Thanks, LJ.

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