All Comments on 'Private Self Ch. 03'

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wweary101 over 5 years ago

From fledgling to a soaring eagle

Compare and contrast this chapter to the first. There was the flicker and glimmer of talent in that first offering, but you've ignited the carnal passion in this chapter. Not an untented trouser or dry knicker gusset in the audience after this. Exquisite.

Lustymarriedmomcantgetenough over 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you

Your praise is certainly more than I deserve. I know so little about writing, although I love to read. I'm no Shakespeare but I bet I'm enjoying the process more than he did.😉

Paul_Chance over 5 years ago

Excellent Addition to the Series

I agree with the comment from the reader above. I've enjoyed the story and watching the evolution of your writing. Keep it up!

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