by sunburycd
A familiar story line but with a great twist loved it very much. This HAS to be continued. Really good quality writing. More than 5 Stars
So she can pussyfeed me daily. I like watching breastfeeding videos. I was wondering if a woman can pussyfeed her son instead of breastfeeding. May be she's gonna have to be be so juicy or pissy to nurse him. Wish I had a hot mom to suck on her pussy while she patting me.
Good effort, very enjoyable.
I had visions of Denise as Diana Rigg or perhaps Jane Fonda
Very Hot first time for Jackson! Imagine, your first blowjob, your first fuck, from a beautiful mature former actress. Wow, one lucky guy! Five Stars, and we hope for a sequel.
They need to become lovers. Jackson should move in with Denise and fuck her cunt all day long
I like the pacing, I like the quotidian setting, I like the relationship setup at the beginning of the story. If you haven't already written a sequel, don't! This is great as it is and while I can see heaps of ways the story could go, that would be too easy. Thank you!
That there are more chapters. You are just getting started. Please don't stop writing this!
Just reading this story brought back memories of who I wanted to be with when I was 18.
Even now many of them look hot. Who's seen Racquel Welch lately?
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5 stars. Fantastic story. definitely needs a chapter 2. Wow - loved it. very,very sexy!
My crushes were not movie stars, unless you count Mary Ann( Dawn Wells) mine were music stars, Linda Ronstadt, just listening to Blue Bayou would give me a hard on and Ann and Nancy Wilson (Heart).
We usually don't ask for 2nd chapters but this one ended too soon but great story, thanks for sharing.
Hi. Great start, is there more? How does their relationship evolve? What does his mother say or do when she discovers her best friend (who she's sexually attracted to), has snagged her son?
That was so erotically spell binding! I hope you continue this story or write others to keeps us all on the edge of our lust for true love and incredible sex as your words so aptly described.
Pls Keep On Writing For The Same Category .It Was An Excellent Story.............
As usual, you didn't disappoint. This was yet another great story. I do hope there's a crossover with Lauren, Natalie and Sebastian in the future.
it could have been a bit longer or maybe another chapter would be nice.
I was happy surprised at the whole story.. it was romantic, and tender, and sexual, excellently written ! Im very impressed.. job well done Sunburycd !
Your story brought back memories....such a ring of truth! It was the unexpected sex that was always the best. As a teenage boy it was never possible to plan sex with a much older woman. She needed to be sex-starved and I needed to be available and ready to be used by her at a time of her choosing. I made sure I complied with all those requirements, as a result I scored every time! (Or, on reflection, was she doing the scoring!)
I loved this story, and your characters are so well-conceived. You need a little bit of editing, but your writing is just wonderful. Thank you!
You hinted at interest between Deirdre/Denice and Elsie. Perhaps they get it on, joined by Jackson?
I loved the build up, the BJ, and the sex. When is she going to teach him about pussies and tongues. He needs some expert teaching on that score. I wonder if his mom ever taught him massage.
Oh well, good job.
Good story, had me leaking all the way through haha! Does need some editing but still a good read. Had me confused when Denise was up on the ladder and Jackson saw that she had "french cut panties" on, should have been French cut, but when the went to apply the oil she had boy-shorts panties on. Just wondering if she changed panties on the way to the back or maybe Jackson was just too horny to see straight, lol. Story has a lot of possible following chapters, maybe Denise and Jackson's Mom or all three. Thanks
This is a perfect story to have a sequel and explore more in their relationship. Maybe add in mom at some point
What a fun story: endearing characters, excellent build up and anticipation, out-of-bounds-yet-plausible reaches by Denise. Outstanding!
Great story, nice gentle build up to an excellent finish. Would love this story to continue. His mother must have her next in the showers at the tennis club.Then the three get together and after watching the women together he fucks his mother then Denise
o man, We got to have more. Don't leave me hanging, it was too good of story to end now. Please add some more chapter to this . I will be anxiously waiting, and by the way, thanks for writing this.
A great story! You have a wonderful way of not only making the impossible happen, but making the plot slip so smoothly through the gears that the outcome seems inevitable. Excellent way you introduce and fill out the characters, and gradually build their relationship.
Wonderful story, just wondering what the "mom" is going to think and say........():\