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cattenicatteniover 5 years ago
Brilliant

A familiar story line but with a great twist loved it very much. This HAS to be continued. Really good quality writing. More than 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

Nice story. Much potential for sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Comment posting again, If you didn't see my first comment. please write such a story

So she can pussyfeed me daily. I like watching breastfeeding videos. I was wondering if a woman can pussyfeed her son instead of breastfeeding. May be she's gonna have to be be so juicy or pissy to nurse him. Wish I had a hot mom to suck on her pussy while she patting me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well done

Good effort, very enjoyable.

I had visions of Denise as Diana Rigg or perhaps Jane Fonda

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
Hot

Very Hot first time for Jackson! Imagine, your first blowjob, your first fuck, from a beautiful mature former actress. Wow, one lucky guy! Five Stars, and we hope for a sequel.

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
Cum

They need to become lovers. Jackson should move in with Denise and fuck her cunt all day long

swfb70swfb70over 5 years ago
loved it

look forward to the sequel where his Mother joins them

melbclaymanmelbclaymanover 5 years ago
Five stars

I like the pacing, I like the quotidian setting, I like the relationship setup at the beginning of the story. If you haven't already written a sequel, don't! This is great as it is and while I can see heaps of ways the story could go, that would be too easy. Thank you!

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 5 years ago
I sure hope

That there are more chapters. You are just getting started. Please don't stop writing this!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
So many memories of past stars.

Just reading this story brought back memories of who I wanted to be with when I was 18.

Even now many of them look hot. Who's seen Racquel Welch lately?

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt4795124/mediaviewer/rm3233298176?ft0=name&fv0=nm00

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
brillaint again!!

5 stars. Fantastic story. definitely needs a chapter 2. Wow - loved it. very,very sexy!

lockedhubbylockedhubbyover 5 years ago
Great story

Great story as usual. Loved the build up.

couple4fun4080couple4fun4080over 5 years ago
5 stars!

My crushes were not movie stars, unless you count Mary Ann( Dawn Wells) mine were music stars, Linda Ronstadt, just listening to Blue Bayou would give me a hard on and Ann and Nancy Wilson (Heart).

We usually don't ask for 2nd chapters but this one ended too soon but great story, thanks for sharing.

TSreaderTSreaderover 5 years ago
đŸ˜‹ yummy!

Very yummy indeed! I hope you continue this story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice story, is there more?

Hi. Great start, is there more? How does their relationship evolve? What does his mother say or do when she discovers her best friend (who she's sexually attracted to), has snagged her son?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Totally Intoxicating

That was so erotically spell binding! I hope you continue this story or write others to keeps us all on the edge of our lust for true love and incredible sex as your words so aptly described.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
$

$25 an hour, yeah that sounds like a bit much.

AngusStewartAngusStewartover 5 years ago
Well done.

Great story line. Entertaining and fun. It held my attention.

Softbody65Softbody65over 5 years ago
Excellent story

Great story, hopefully there will be more to follow...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Simply Great

Pls Keep On Writing For The Same Category .It Was An Excellent Story.............

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very sexy story, enjoyed it!

Older women are so sexy!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Another great story!

As usual, you didn't disappoint. This was yet another great story. I do hope there's a crossover with Lauren, Natalie and Sebastian in the future.

mammoetmammoetabout 5 years ago
loved it

it could have been a bit longer or maybe another chapter would be nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Im surprised...

I was happy surprised at the whole story.. it was romantic, and tender, and sexual, excellently written ! Im very impressed.. job well done Sunburycd !

2armoured2armouredalmost 5 years ago
Memories!

Your story brought back memories....such a ring of truth! It was the unexpected sex that was always the best. As a teenage boy it was never possible to plan sex with a much older woman. She needed to be sex-starved and I needed to be available and ready to be used by her at a time of her choosing. I made sure I complied with all those requirements, as a result I scored every time! (Or, on reflection, was she doing the scoring!)

JDColsJDColsover 4 years ago
Love it!

I loved this story, and your characters are so well-conceived. You need a little bit of editing, but your writing is just wonderful. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter 2 & 3?

You hinted at interest between Deirdre/Denice and Elsie. Perhaps they get it on, joined by Jackson?

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Another good one!

I loved the build up, the BJ, and the sex. When is she going to teach him about pussies and tongues. He needs some expert teaching on that score. I wonder if his mom ever taught him massage.

Oh well, good job.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 4 years ago
M(Mature)ILF

Good story, had me leaking all the way through haha! Does need some editing but still a good read. Had me confused when Denise was up on the ladder and Jackson saw that she had "french cut panties" on, should have been French cut, but when the went to apply the oil she had boy-shorts panties on. Just wondering if she changed panties on the way to the back or maybe Jackson was just too horny to see straight, lol. Story has a lot of possible following chapters, maybe Denise and Jackson's Mom or all three. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

This is a perfect story to have a sequel and explore more in their relationship. Maybe add in mom at some point

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

What a fun story: endearing characters, excellent build up and anticipation, out-of-bounds-yet-plausible reaches by Denise. Outstanding!

BL4D3R1D3RBL4D3R1D3Rover 4 years ago
Great

Great story, nice gentle build up to an excellent finish. Would love this story to continue. His mother must have her next in the showers at the tennis club.Then the three get together and after watching the women together he fucks his mother then Denise

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago
More, More, More

o man, We got to have more. Don't leave me hanging, it was too good of story to end now. Please add some more chapter to this . I will be anxiously waiting, and by the way, thanks for writing this.

woodseaveswoodseavesabout 4 years ago
The impossible union, you made possible

A great story! You have a wonderful way of not only making the impossible happen, but making the plot slip so smoothly through the gears that the outcome seems inevitable. Excellent way you introduce and fill out the characters, and gradually build their relationship.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Fantastic Storytelling*****

Wow super entertaining read!! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow what a story. A pleasure to read.

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGalealmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story, just wondering what the "mom" is going to think and say........():\

Thor69269Thor69269over 1 year ago

Great story. Very romantically done

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[22.12.22]

Trey Romantique und Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

Old_Pervert_KanuckOld_Pervert_Kanuck6 days ago

Too bad Jackson didn't find "Helga, Princess of the Reich".

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