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oh sandspike, Im in love!!
this is an openly warm, romantic beauty of a poem. I love the rhythm you set and your word choices are virtually perfect. And the ending...sigh.... :)
Wonderful
Beautiful and romantic,
lovely writing,
lovely piece,
i loved it.
thanks.
~ J
lovely verse
nice to see your work again..guess you'll miss the surf ..I would...thanks..blue
5^
Beautiful free verse poem. Love it!
moving......
and the last 2 lines certainly leaves the piece heavy in feeling.......nicely done.......don
~~
And here is yet another way to say, "I love you."
This one...
...hits you where you live. Very moving. A powerful expression of love.
An Array
of emotion you brought
to mind, but one lasting
thought...you left,
sacrifice.
5*+ ! -sGp-
Yawn
ZZZZzzzzz. . . .
With you.
Whether at the Seashore or the mountains ~ Baby I'm with you.
A MOVE FROM THE BEACH
to a mountain hideaway. TK U MLJ LV NV
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