by sandspike
this is an openly warm, romantic beauty of a poem. I love the rhythm you set and your word choices are virtually perfect. And the ending...sigh.... :)
Beautiful and romantic,
lovely writing,
lovely piece,
i loved it.
thanks.
~ J
nice to see your work again..guess you'll miss the surf ..I would...thanks..blue
and the last 2 lines certainly leaves the piece heavy in feeling.......nicely done.......don
...hits you where you live. Very moving. A powerful expression of love.
of emotion you brought
to mind, but one lasting
thought...you left,
sacrifice.
5*+ ! -sGp-