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Voices in the Darkness

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/06/05

Loved it

I loved the way you combined the hot sex into a mystery novel. I was hard for hours.

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by Anonymous06/06/05

A Sequal Please

Well put together, now for a revenge sequal.

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by Anonymous06/09/05

To be continued?

Well developed story. Please consider continuing your novel. R

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