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interesting story
diferent Interesting I enjoyed it
Well now!!!
Best chapter yet. PAYBACK IS A BITCH!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEHEHE. Now he should give her pills till she is a half and half, and HORNY all the time.....
Paul
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interesting
I loved the fact that vivian got her revenge, not sure i liked the ending. Interesting story though
Nice way to end it!
Or have you ended it? Maybe "Victor" can start whoring Brenda out to some guys? Completely turn her into a full-time slave?
Vivian/Victor opts out and accepts his lot
The ending lacked a little something. Vivian was a loser...Brenda definitely was a loser...no winners in this fantasy...what kind of a finish is that?
Thrilled
Finaly a good ending to the story Vivian wins by accepting her/his fate and the secretary gets treated like crap for totaly destroying someones life wow a real world ending I am totaly blown by this. I loved the ending hell I loved the whole story. Thanks for being original
great story
this was great,when will u write a continuance of this story?
soon I hope.
Good
But the ending didn't seem enough. For example she could have found out the name of the company that made the pills and sued them, siting brenda as the source because then brenda would be sued twice. Once by her boss and then by the pill company since she lied to her friend about the use of the pills.
Revenge is a dish best served from behind
Excellent ending. It's nice to see a non-consensual story from the perspective a female to male transformation
Bravo.
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