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A Damn Hot Story
Eroticism with Love is grand, ain't it? 'Specially when the tale is well told.
It has to be a 5
This is so sweet and romantic and the words are neither too tame or flowery. Just perfect. Real lucky man to have such an understanding gal and vice versa.
Wonderful and Sensitive
This is a great story, very well told and I felt a part of it. I envy you in this story. Well done. Thank you.
sweet, tender and tasty!
and I don't mean that in a gay way, it made me want to go hump something soft and curvy. Good style, although your adjectives seemed to be performing forplay with your adverbs!-- keep em coming!
So Sweet
From two simple pictures you wrote something so sweet. I love your story! Thank you!
Oh wow!
Such a hot and erotic story. Your words paint a vivid picture of the scene and the sensations and eagerness of the couple. Wonderful portrayal of a couple in love... and lust!
Crim
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Is it wrong to be jealous of the relationship between your charachters? Excellent story, Rob!
Amazing
Smut? You don't think highly enough of your writing. Even the smallest thing you throw together comes out extremely etertaining. I think I've read 10 now. Nothing has disappointed me thus far.
Thanks for the advice!
You replied to a post of mine on the forums, telling me to read this story, and I did, I can now see more clearly the style in which I should write.
It's also a really fantastic story, I can feel the love in it. Nice work. =)
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