Convent Girls

Your back.

Your back with my kind of story, almost non-consent. Thanks.

UFFDAH !!!

Short, but oh so sweet, and oh so good.

Next?

Hmmm. the Mother Superior is about to join in a convent gang bang, i hope!

where is the rest

This is a good begining but you need to continue it. In the same lesbian vein. It is a good start but not a complete story. Let bring her out as one of the girls.

Great Story

Hey, I already sent you the message about how much I liked this story, but I just wanted to say thanks for the comments on my stories. Maybe one day I'll have as many stories as you have on here...but probably not lol.

Sexy as hell, but…

I would have liked to see either more build-up (Celeste meeting Theresa, being nervous about her reputation, becoming friendly, etc., before getting her wake-up surprise) or more follow-through (Celeste learns to eat pussy, professes her new devotion to lesbianism, seduces a new girl herself, etc). Or, better, both. While not quite a fragment, it did feel a little short-changed.

That said, still hot.

HOTT, HOTT, Made me wet for sure. Look forward to more...

keep

please update
should keep story going this sounds good

Improvements

This piece requires some editing of the text for typos and word usaesge.

Should the intent be to build from this story one should add some "hooks" at the end. For instance, instead of resting on the roomate's acknowledgement of her pleasure, and indirectly, her sexuality, the addition of a reference to her thought processes such as, "could I do it again? Could I reciprocate with Teressa? would set the foundation for a complementary story. A reference to the venue and its implications could add drama. How had they managed to escape the evening bed check, for example? Or, it was well known that another novice had been caught and subject to an unknown punishment by Sister superior, but the Novice had never disclosed its nature and form.