When will Mike wake up and dump peggy and go for mary?
Seems like a bit of a 'bridge' story from the beginning of the relationship to the continuance of it. I liked the others in the series more, so far, but this continues along the lines.
I certainly look forward to the rest of it, when Mike finds out that he's been eating cum and when something else happens with Mary....
And I appreciate the stories for what they are, so don't let the people who fail to read the warning on the first story get to you! Keep writing please!
It's a good story, but it seems like the end could have been a completely sperate story. All of a sudden there is a large jump in time and given that teasing & frustration plays a large part it seems that you're missing out on a lot of the good parts by rolling so much up into a few paragraphs at the end. (I don't have an issue with the story topic or the way that she treats him, I just want to see all that happens ;) ).
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