All Comments on '18-Year-Old Cheerleading Sister!'

This poem, although a wonderfully thought out work, was much too long. I seem to have lost interest in it after reading about how the brother described every single body part (in length) while narrating the poem.

Never, ever rhyme the word "Drink"

Meat? Meat? Oh yeah, can Dad meet your sister??

Every boy's most vivid wet dream.

Very sick, equally disturbing: in brief, well-done.

I am not a huge fan of rhymed poetry but I will not hold your chosen format against you. Pretty darn good!

Gotta love a cocksucking cheerleader cumslut

Too bad sisters hold brothers in disregard.