A good continuation to a good story. However, you need to use more commas and semi colons to make your story more readable. Keep it going.
msboy8 (male age 43)
My wife and I love part two and can't wait for part three. Very hot writing and very sexy. How can someone complain about punctuation when the words are so descriptive and arousing. Thanks and please write more.
Keep up the good work. Really intense!
Since Nora loved the taste of her pussy cream, maybe she can eat pussy as her daughted gets her lashes.
Extremely hot. I am going on to the next chapter quickly.
Dave, male, 63. Great story, well told.
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