Centaur Breeding

You're better than this

Great begining of a story but why did you give us something that wasn't complete? Come on, I know you've got it in you Angel.

Sean Renaud

Don't Worry

Don't worry, I'm working on Chapter 2 right now =)

Himmm....

Very hot... looking fwd to the next part!

I like it!

Well, it's just starting out...I'm sure you'll make it great as usual!

Short but a great start.

I like the concept and love how its started. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Badly rushed and unsatisfying

The abundace of errors, like "bought" instead of "bout" and the extra words like "gave" in - Taking the girl to his house, he gave lay her down gently on the bed - show that the author is more concerned with quantity of output, rather than quality. This story is a good way to get past the censorship of bestiality, but it failed to deliver a satisfying conclusion. It is a mistake to turn a reader on and then leave her hanging there. By all means spread this story out over several chapters, but make each one a fulfilling one!

Onto the next chapter...

Wrong... yet riveting.
Melikes.

Titilating . . .

I shall read on . . .

more please!!!!!

Please make this into a story! This is Excellent!!!!!

Excellent beginning, looki forward to more.

Cool Story

Well written, erotic enough, and with a decent storyline, and no big holes in the information. Great work.

well...

The beginning was great, but I'm not gonna lie...the last scene had some pretty messed up shit... I would have preferred like an orgy or something.:/