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Orgasm Under Color of Authority

byStacyViller©
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by Anonymous05/06/07

Missing

Did you forget the rest of it? The end is too sudden. Shame

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by Anonymous02/16/08

good story line

This author has a good sense of "writing dialog, but the senerio had no real conflict. I mean, reluctance is what idea you get from the words "Color of Authority".

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by Anonymous01/19/09

keep on it

great start, great use of language, need more character development. keep writing you have great potential

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Short and sweet

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