All Comments on 'Lana's Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
obviously mis catagory

this is an obvious loving/cheating wives tale, not a romance

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
obviously romantic

according to my dictionary!

rgraham666rgraham666almost 19 years ago
Well written

and extremely hot.

Such rich use of language. very nice.

It really deserves a full story written around it though.

Still, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This is Not romance

This is a cheating Sluts story . With a Scumbag brother as the villain. Good ending would be they get caught . He gets drawn and quarter. Head put on a spike . She's given to the Army to use as their scum slut .

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