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Passed By Without a Glance

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by Anonymous

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by Jennifer C06/02/05

great stuff

Liked it even more than
part 1.
Nice work,
thanks.
~ J

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by My Erotic Tale06/02/05

cute poem

silver-ish orange-gish
yep clever write~

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by sack06/03/05

too clever for words!

And a real day brightener! Thank you!

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by Belegon07/15/05

made me smile

very fun and quick and enjoyable

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by Anonymous07/25/05

Another

really fun read! I like this a lot. It just needs a teeny bit of tightening meter wise (I'm kind of a nut about that) and then it'll be perfect!

Thanks,

Boo

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by LeBroz07/28/05

You Fiend !

A nice little verse
fiendishly wrought
sending my mind into overdrive
in thinking how
those two little words
can't be made to rhyme

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