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I have visions

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by WickedEve06/03/05

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It started out good but when I got to this part: "of fast cars, speeding cars, roaring on rainy roads" it got better than good. The second half is totally excellent!

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by Anonymous05/02/12

Brilliant

Brilliant poem.

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