by Clansmansco
Your story is off to an interesting beginning. Where will you take it next? Will Sue and Cathy be ganged by the guys in the box? Waiting for the next chapter.
I didn't realize this was the "Beginning of Erotic Stories".com... So many of the authors here start a story and then leave it hanging. I don't see the point in it and think it's a waste of time to read the "introduction" to a real story.
A promising start, but it doesn't really go anywhere. Why only post the intro to a story?
You turned this into a chapter story without informing anybody, so everybody gets all warmed up reading it and then you literally keep them hanging! Not cool.
I've seen posting after posting that appears to be complete stories but end with "To be continued." A simple chapter number would suffice to alert the readers what they're getting into. From reading the other comments, it seems the only way to fit back against these idiots is to give 'em all low ratings until they learn.
Its called CHAPTER 1!!!! Use it next time made a decent starting story suck. Wife was really into it and just stopped.
i have wanted to watch my current girlfriend get gangbanged she says that wont hapen but i know she use to take on two guys at once several times a year before we got together ive watched my ex wife in a 6 guy gangbang a few times loved seeing her pussy get stretched out and filled with cum
What can be more exciting than watching your wife getting fucked by some young studs ??