All Comments on 'Watching and Being Watched is Fun...'

Very erotic story, I loved it. I wanted them to have a little oral sex in there, but it was great story. I liked the way you gave a description to the country side, it helped me to picture the scenery around them while they were on their adventure.

Thanks for this, I enjoyed it a lot, knowing the area I can imagine how ideal it would be for such adventures.

I enjoyed the pee games, there was a nice amount of detail and the sex at the end was arousing as well.

I would love to hear more about their adventures, I was kind of hoping for even more... Although i understand that is not for everyone.

That was a very horny story. Loved the whole thing and would enjoy more of the same.

Great story, keep them coming please. Pee play is very horny.

Really just blown away. The way you described the scenery was just breathtaking. It really reminded me of a teenage romance in a beach paradise. Even the friction between the characters was just so addictive. Its one of those reads you can't put down and you feel sad when it ends. Not many people can share a real story like that and I'm really glad you did. It really was beautiful and romantic even though it's a pre story lol. But I've had similar experiences just not outside which is what makes this so unique and special. Cheers!

Great pee play story in a fantastic outdoor setting!

Beautifully written. Love your descriptions of the sex and the romance and the coastline...they all blend together to make this a sensuous story that is incredibly arousing!

Thanks!

Enjoyed the places you narrated as seen in person, felt the smell of the air, had a touch of the wind and what not.

I loved your story. More please …

The premise is too unbelievable to be even remotely worth building a story upon. Camping or hiking or lost in the woods could have worked. Maybe. A character who is described as being a surfer who has grown up in the area? Well I used to be a surfer who grew up by the beach and NOBODY, I mean NOBODY I ever knew, even children, definitely not surfers and certainly not constant, instinctive toilet hunters known to us as women, were so stupid as to not see the giant toilet they only had to wade out into to relieve themselves. And then cleaning up with the sea water they didn't see? And this alleged English writer clearly has never in the course of his life attended an English class. His native language. I've seen some doozies here but this one takes the cake. But that's what happens to fools too dumb to appreciate the taste of women's urine.